meme sheep :x

[whitereflection]

Meme from Jackie:

If you happen to be working on some creative writing project, fanfiction or what have you, post exactly one sentence (or more) from each of your current work(s) in progress in your journal. It should probably be your favorite or most intriguing sentence so far, but what you choose is entirely your discretion. Mention the title (and genre)if you like, but don't mention anything else -- this is merely to whet the general appetite for your forthcoming work(s).

Doing this b/c for once I actually have tidbits. o_o


ByaRen for the one_blanket community (I really do have a bit worked on, really T__T )
Title: (very subject to change) Frost Moon Reflecting in a Black Ice Pond
I won't lower myself in your eyes. But when choosing between the heart and pride...what should I stand up for? What do I allow to be bruised?

Or in the end, will both take the wound?


ShunUki...for me, really. :x
Title: Draw Me After You

But his heart...felt nothing. It was like a room that had once been filled with many treasures and many lives--but was suddenly empty, everything within gone missing, bare walls and floor echoing back the footsteps and voice of but a solitary soul.

Comments

[sublimeparadigm.livejournal.com]

These. Are. So. Good!

*makes grabby hands at beautiful language* Damn it's been awhile since I've managed to be so poetic with prose. :o


AND I LOVE THAT TITLE. For the ByaRen one. THAT IS SO COOL. OMG.

[whitereflection.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥ Egads, you can make a person feel encouraged. Definitely is motivation to keep at it and not keep stalling out. :o Will keep trying >o<

And seriously? Re: that title I mean. I liked it at first, but it seems wordy the more I think about it. Though it's alluded to in the story, so it does tie in...

Bah, I babble. Thank you ♥ /hugzorz