Very pretty! Much looking forward to crunchy leaves this fall--it's my favorite season and ho boy am I sick of summer, but it always seems a little sad to me. The haiku captures both of those sides, at least imo.
Thank you tons, ne. :) Absolutely tons. It's not only nice to get a comment, especially about something poetic, but that was exactly the feeling I wanted when the thought hit me. Does really make me happy to hear it worked right <3 And thanks extra because I still do the 'want to write like you' thing on your work. ^___^
(And holy cats, do I feel the same way. Fall's my favorite--I don't like summer, and this year's been horrid, especially for humidity :p )
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Date: 2004-07-21 12:11 pm (UTC)I wish I could write poetry like you. ^__^
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Date: 2004-07-25 02:44 am (UTC)(And holy cats, do I feel the same way. Fall's my favorite--I don't like summer, and this year's been horrid, especially for humidity :p )